i'd do it again #2

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By Finding Myself♥♥ •

all i said i wouldn't ("go lay down") i did all i said i'd do ("c'mon just do it") never happened all of my ambitions ("God, just do it") my hopes ("c'mon faster") and my dreams ("will you let me"?) are now impossible and the worst part about it ("i'm only doin this because i love you") is that i'd do it again

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September 22, 2005 02:13ill haven

interesting!
it leaves the mind with questions, which i guess is how girls are supposed to work ^_^.
thanks for this one. i like it.

did you mean to exclude the word "do" from the end of L1?
i also assumed that "doin" was purposeful.

awesome.
thanks for commenting.
chuff

October 4, 2005 00:44ill haven

i guess you did, huh?
oh well.
i got you covered so far, 'terr. have a sweet life.

November 3, 2005 10:46hidden

Interesting, I'm not sure if its meant to be read with two people telling the poem but thats how i read it. I liked it. OOh and about your user info, It was you that sent those bloody chain letters! (joke)

April 21, 2006 00:50Finding Myself♥♥

that's exactly how i imagined it being read. i'm glad you got it :)

May 24, 2007 20:55Angel of Music

Great job! you are very talented!