pain feat. draino

By <h>ill haven</h> • October 5, 2005 00:12 UTC

Should I tell them? Yes I should How'd I get this far from home? Would they listen? Yes they would Tell them how you ever roam. Could they hurt me? Yes they could. How did i learn to ignore the abuse? Would they lie to me? Yes they would. Can i ever believe their excuse? They continue? Yes they do. They're still letting it all out. Still abusing? Yes they are. Hoping to remove the doubt. Can I take it? Yes I can. Without a single complaint Will I make it? Yes I will. Unable to act freely in restraint

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September 22, 2005 23:20Finding Myself♥♥

and you say that girls leave you with questions! i like this. by the way this is "liar" sorry i had to change my name but my sister, well she was reading my poems so i thought that if i changed my name she wouldn't be able to anymore. i like this poem, it leaves me with so many unanswered questions. what's it about? unless you don't want to say.

September 24, 2005 01:10ill haven

Well, I wrote it cooperatively with a guy with the username of Draino on another poetry site that happened to have a forum. We took turns writing stanzas. To give you an idea, he wrote the last one, I wrote the first. We alternated.