pain feat. draino, by ill haven
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Should I tell them?
Yes I should
How'd I get this far from home?
Would they listen?
Yes they would
Tell them how you ever roam.
Could they hurt me?
Yes they could.
How did i learn to ignore the abuse?
Would they lie to me?
Yes they would.
Can i ever believe their excuse?
They continue?
Yes they do.
They're still letting it all out.
Still abusing?
Yes they are.
Hoping to remove the doubt.
Can I take it?
Yes I can.
Without a single complaint
Will I make it?
Yes I will.
Unable to act freely in restraint |
| Posted: 2005-10-05 00:12:50 UTC |
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| 2005-09-22 23:20:35 | Finding Myself♥♥ |
| and you say that girls leave you with questions! i like this. by the way this is "liar" sorry i had to change my name but my sister, well she was reading my poems so i thought that if i changed my name she wouldn't be able to anymore. i like this poem, it leaves me with so many unanswered questions. what's it about? unless you don't want to say. |
| 2005-09-24 01:10:11 | ill haven |
| Well, I wrote it cooperatively with a guy with the username of Draino on another poetry site that happened to have a forum. We took turns writing stanzas. To give you an idea, he wrote the last one, I wrote the first. We alternated. |