intended for the general public..., by ill haven
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...but too afraid to send it
Listen all ye people of the earth
Hear my cry
Here's my cry
Let the dreamers
Wonder why
I'm calling out to you
Hear me all ye people of the earth
Give me hope
Take me, hope
Give the world
Another chance
To sing a song to you
Look here, all ye people of the earth
That's enough
Hats come off
Bravery
Is never there
When it comes to you |
| Posted: 2005-10-05 00:14:19 UTC |
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| 2005-09-22 23:08:16 | Finding Myself♥♥ |
| i like this. it's different. it's really cool. oh and why'd you change your name to LAm? cause you know that that's deffenetly not true, right? atleast i don't think so. i like this poems. it's in my top three. |
| 2005-10-15 07:17:01 | Don't build lies on ice cubes. |
| I really like this poem, its thought provoking- and i think that good poetry should either be that or it should allow someone else to connect with you. Its a great poem actually, I just re-read it... The short stanza's and metre make it really quite powerful. And I love the reptition...ahh its just a really really good poem!! |
| 2005-10-24 22:36:33 | Sandwich Massacre |
| i see an ocean of people and someone standing on a hill with a bullhorn and shouting this to them all. it's on a desolate stormy day, graying the faces of everyone below.... of course your poem doesn't have to illustrate that... but it doesn't have to. the sweet simplicity of it just brought upon this setting of a broken world and that final straw of getting everyone together and being very blunt about the present times. i guess anyone can imagine this anywhere, or not imagine anything at all... but yeah... i likes very muchly. |