I'm sorry, God I'm sorry, by hidden
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I'm sorry
I ###### with you
I'm sorry
I played you
I'm sorry
I didn't mean to
I'm sorry
it was a accident
I'm sorry
I don't know where to begin
I'm sorry
for never meeting you
I'm sorry
for cheating you
I'm sorry
for the way i made you feel
I'm sorry
for this ordeal
I'm sorry
I feel such a dick
I'm sorry
To think what i've done, it makes me sick
I'm sorry
I can't begin to fathom what I've done
I'm sorry
I feel the dark side of the sun
I'm sorry
I feel like i can't apologies enough
I'm sorry
to both of you |
| Posted: 2005-10-07 21:27:25 UTC |
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| 2005-10-02 00:21:03 | Finding Myself♥♥ |
| L8-an*, L10-know*,L8-where*,L18-ment?* i think, i know that i can't comment on grammar eather, but hopefuly i helped you out a little. hope ur not one of those people who hate it when they are corrected. i like this poem. if it's to God, i should also write on. i say the same thing every night. sooo ur a dude and 15, just kiddin, i'm not on here to meet people. but thanks for commenting on sorry. love ya, bye |
| 2005-10-07 21:23:08 | hidden |
| Thanks, I don't take offense at spelling corrections unless there really cocky about it. I've said it before, i need to check my poems before I post them. and how did you know that I'm a dude? and 15? |
| 2005-12-09 18:55:33 | Lillian |
| I actually like that some of the grammar and punctuation is wrong, because it makes a reader such as myself feel the mood more. This is a good poem, but I hope you don't feel this feeling anymore. It's probably a very hard one... bye! |