I'm sorry, God I'm sorry

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I'm sorry I ###### with you I'm sorry I played you I'm sorry I didn't mean to I'm sorry it was a accident I'm sorry I don't know where to begin I'm sorry for never meeting you I'm sorry for cheating you I'm sorry for the way i made you feel I'm sorry for this ordeal I'm sorry I feel such a dick I'm sorry To think what i've done, it makes me sick I'm sorry I can't begin to fathom what I've done I'm sorry I feel the dark side of the sun I'm sorry I feel like i can't apologies enough I'm sorry to both of you

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October 2, 2005 00:21Finding Myself♥♥

L8-an*, L10-know*,L8-where*,L18-ment?* i think, i know that i can't comment on grammar eather, but hopefuly i helped you out a little. hope ur not one of those people who hate it when they are corrected. i like this poem. if it's to God, i should also write on. i say the same thing every night. sooo ur a dude and 15, just kiddin, i'm not on here to meet people. but thanks for commenting on sorry. love ya, bye

October 4, 2005 21:11look how pretty she is when she falls down...

this is really good, you have a few mistakes on here but i like it

October 7, 2005 21:23hidden

Thanks, I don't take offense at spelling corrections unless there really cocky about it. I've said it before, i need to check my poems before I post them. and how did you know that I'm a dude? and 15?

December 9, 2005 18:55Lillian

I actually like that some of the grammar and punctuation is wrong, because it makes a reader such as myself feel the mood more. This is a good poem, but I hope you don't feel this feeling anymore. It's probably a very hard one... bye!