(no), by Finding Myself♥♥
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"can i do it"?
i don't think so
"can i stay there"?
i don't know
"do you trust"?
of course
"here it goes"
(no)
the "" are him
i am the second lines
the () are my thoughts
hope you enjoy |
Posted: 2007-05-13 20:34:03 UTC |
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2005-09-23 22:28:33 | thndrhwk |
Oddly haunting; it's kind of wierd but interesting. |
2005-09-24 07:16:38 | ill haven |
I like it! It makes the reader think, which is what i love in poems. I hate it both in poems and in horror movies when they dumb the audience down by telling them EVERYTHING!!! cough cough Cry Wolf cough cough.
good write
-af- |