ciao, by adam
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i cant believe ive done it,
i cant believe im here,
ive left everything behind me,
my mind is full of fear
i dont know if i like it,
i dont know what is right,
im not sure what to do now,
should i run or should i fight
im not sure who i am now,
im not sure what i am,
but i just cannot end it,
just to fall back in your hands
but whatever happens now,
and whatever happened then,
i now my little life,
is coming to a sad conclusive end
ciao |
| Posted: 2005-09-24 02:16:10 UTC |
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| 2005-09-25 16:10:21 | My_pain_your_thrill |
| Hey dude..I miss you even more now!! I really hope you are doing ok over there... I can't believe you actually left us all behind! Bet no one ever thought that would happen. This poem is sad but very, very well written, looking forward to your next master piece. Luv u xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox |
| 2005-09-29 00:13:18 | adam |
| i miss you too. you know what im like, i jut had to get out and do something, but i haven't left you. when i get a place you guys are comin over, cause you gotta see this place. love you always, im glad youre readin my stuff, i think you are the only one:( xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
| 2005-10-06 01:14:41 | Magick Water |
| In Frech, "ciao" is spelt "tchao"... yea, oh, and weet poem. This could be on a Hallmark card! Nah, it's too good. |