wake me...

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By Finding Myself♥♥

wake me, when there's a reason to see light wake me, when excitement comes wake me, when a close on dies wake me then, and not before wake me, when the misery ends wake me, when there's happiness wake me, when a child is born wake me then, and not before wake me, when you're all alone wake me, when you need the company wake me, when there's no one else wake me then, and not before wake me, when these things go on don't even think it otherwise wake me, when my funeral comes wake me then, and not before

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September 24, 2005 07:18ill haven

excitement*
i don't really understand line 6
misery*
there's* happiness

I like this poem! I like the ending especially. How long did you work on this one?

October 10, 2005 21:59Don't build lies on ice cubes.

Its weird, one of my poems has the same title and yet the content of them is completely different. I like the different way you used a similar idea. I love the line wake me then, and not before. Its really meaningful.