wake me..., by Finding Myself♥♥
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wake me,
when there's a reason to see light
wake me,
when excitement comes
wake me,
when a close on dies
wake me then,
and not before
wake me,
when the misery ends
wake me,
when there's happiness
wake me,
when a child is born
wake me then,
and not before
wake me,
when you're all alone
wake me,
when you need the company
wake me,
when there's no one else
wake me then,
and not before
wake me,
when these things go on
don't even think it otherwise
wake me,
when my funeral comes
wake me then,
and not before |
| Posted: 2007-05-13 20:34:32 UTC |
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| 2005-09-24 07:18:07 | ill haven |
| excitement*
i don't really understand line 6
misery*
there's* happiness
I like this poem! I like the ending especially. How long did you work on this one? |
| 2005-10-10 21:59:53 | Don't build lies on ice cubes. |
| Its weird, one of my poems has the same title and yet the content of them is completely different. I like the different way you used a similar idea. I love the line wake me then, and not before. Its really meaningful. |