By Finding Myself♥♥ •
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I think the word your after is once. you put ounce in another poem aswell. Sorry I know I'm not really one to comment on grammer and spling but that was just annoying me. I quite liked that, the divices you use are effective.
well, allow me to correct your poem and the comment. ^_^
love
i miss it
its gentle love and care
love
i miss it
its warmth, the life it shares
love
i miss it
soothing, healing touch
love
i miss you
please return at once
AND THEN THE COMMENT:
I think the word you're after is "once". You put "ounce" in another poem as well. Sorry, I know I'm not really one to comment on grammar and spelling, but that was just annoying me. I quite liked that, the devices you use are effective.
i think this sweet love poem is darling!