Powerful Beauty, by Debz ~~ lost amoungst the pages of a story yet to be told ~~ Subscribe to rss feed for Debz  ~~ lost amoungst the pages of a story yet to be told ~~

I watched you that night,
your sexual energy took flight.
An angel floating along life
a crowd surrounds you
a magnet drawing them near.

Do you know the power you possess?
Does it make you depressed?

You cut yourself,
i watch you bleed.
nothing i can do
you drew me in
and i cant leave
i never wanted to anyway

the power you possess
may make you regress
too strong for you to handle

just let it in
and understand the beauty
that surrounds you!
Posted: 2005-10-03 15:41:30 UTC

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2005-10-03 20:25:45XRebzX
I really do like this poem, i like the way it is written and the structure is great. Good work :)

2005-10-07 14:53:50My_pain_your_thrill
Like it alot! Whos this one about? xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox

2005-10-14 17:07:40so_close_but_yetso_far
WOW. I can tooooootally relate 2 this. It made me cry. CRY! well done! xxx

2005-10-14 17:07:59so_close_but_yetso_far
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