Powerful Beauty, by Debz ~~ lost amoungst the pages of a story yet to be told ~~
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I watched you that night,
your sexual energy took flight.
An angel floating along life
a crowd surrounds you
a magnet drawing them near.
Do you know the power you possess?
Does it make you depressed?
You cut yourself,
i watch you bleed.
nothing i can do
you drew me in
and i cant leave
i never wanted to anyway
the power you possess
may make you regress
too strong for you to handle
just let it in
and understand the beauty
that surrounds you! |
Posted: 2005-10-03 15:41:30 UTC |
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2005-10-03 20:25:45 | XRebzX |
I really do like this poem, i like the way it is written and the structure is great. Good work :) |
2005-10-07 14:53:50 | My_pain_your_thrill |
Like it alot! Whos this one about?
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox |
2005-10-14 17:07:40 | so_close_but_yetso_far |
WOW. I can tooooootally relate 2 this. It made me cry. CRY! well done! xxx |