Happy, by Magick Water
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Happy is
just a
word that
can't really
be explained.
Because of
this, can
you really
say that
you are
ever truly
happy when
you don't
even know
what it
really means?
"Just beacuse
I smile
all the
time, it
doesn't mean
I can't
cry."
So true
for many
people. Maybe
someone you
know.
©Stephanie O. "Magick Water" |
Posted: 2005-12-02 22:24:24 UTC |
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2005-11-14 20:22:16 | My_pain_your_thrill |
I like this one too. You told me you need to brush up on your skills, well the only advice I can offer you is just to live, good writing comes with pain. Sad but true. You get your heart broken and get a pen, you will write purely from the heart. xx |
2005-11-29 22:31:49 | Magick Water |
Eh. I had real feelings in this poem. I get made fun of, like, all the time even though, generally, I'm a pretty cool person. I think...
I like commas. |
2005-11-30 18:49:44 | Dy'mond (yup yup goon) |
i like this poem, it has meaning to it. i feel the same way and i been threw it all. get at cha gurl, ya figgadiggle!! |
2006-06-29 07:14:24 | User |
This is nice..and as you grow up and experience more things in life..you can surely be a brilliant poet..!! |
2007-10-20 04:32:57 | Kicon |
Wow, another good poem. I loved in Magick Water!! I can actually feel emotions sepeaking to me. I like the part that says "Just because I smile all the time, it doesn't mean I can't cry." That part I REALLY liked!!
~Kicon :) |