By Magick Water •
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I like this one too. You told me you need to brush up on your skills, well the only advice I can offer you is just to live, good writing comes with pain. Sad but true. You get your heart broken and get a pen, you will write purely from the heart. xx
Eh. I had real feelings in this poem. I get made fun of, like, all the time even though, generally, I'm a pretty cool person. I think...
I like commas.
i like this poem, it has meaning to it. i feel the same way and i been threw it all. get at cha gurl, ya figgadiggle!!
This is nice..and as you grow up and experience more things in life..you can surely be a brilliant poet..!!
Wow, another good poem. I loved in Magick Water!! I can actually feel emotions sepeaking to me. I like the part that says "Just because I smile all the time, it doesn't mean I can't cry." That part I REALLY liked!!
~Kicon :)