Cold in this Abyss

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By Loneliness is condescending •

Break me from this stone Free me from this loneliness I’ll be fine till you ask Your kind smile bringing back the weight Please let go of your assumptions Let me fail and learn You catch me before I slip Crushing me with your hope Your love is so pure It’s getting to be too much It’s the hardest thing Ill ever do My heart entwined with love for you And a fluttering to run Where my mind endowed with growing expectations Something’s going to break tonight Being pulled too many ways Here is when I ask you to stop loving me

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October 7, 2005 04:43ill haven

the hardest thing I'll* ever do
tonight* or is that a play on words?
too many ways*

interesting. that last line i could never do!

April 23, 2006 23:21lost the lonely dead

i wrote one after reading this and i hate them both but thats cause im crazy you did a good job on this and it is good i just not in a very depressed mood right now so im like prettending im happy *thumbs up*