the torn emotion, by hidden
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you don't like me like that
you think i did it on purpose
you think i played you
you were pushed away
you went to the party
with all your friends
you got drunk
you thought you'd pretend
you didn't want this
of that I'm sure
you and your friend
your lie was poor
whats the worst way to lose you V?
to be told the day after
whos the worst guy to lose it to?
the guy you don't even no
it took a week to tell me
as if your proud
your pleased you had sex!
you pleased a crowd
you couldn't even remeber it
but you thought it was good
you come to me for help
yet you were smug!
you think it's cool
we've both had a bad experience
my sex was wrong
you think yours was right
I don't know how to feal about this
my hearts torn for emotion
should i feel sorry for your stupidity?
or should i dismiss your please for help?
it took you a week
but you trusted me above everyone
you told me
i had to help
I love you more than ever
I feel we're the best friends we've ever been
all i want to do is give you a big hug
all i want is to be able to meet you |
Posted: 2005-10-10 14:50:06 UTC |
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2005-10-10 14:19:26 | Lora |
this poem is so split its awsome ... the anger at the start and then the sweet emotion right at the end it all works well
xx |
2005-10-10 14:39:09 | hidden |
you I think this is the poem I'll use for the song. It is perfect, it'll work i think |
2005-10-10 14:54:47 | scott |
its a nice poem althrough you normally do more ryming but you do get the message of the poem across |
2005-10-10 14:59:08 | hidden |
thats half the point scott. the torn emotion, i don't know how to put it across. It hurts but it feels good, i feel guilty but i feel avenged. I don't know what to say and quite how to say it. I'm putting it into a song. I'll post the song when I've sorted it |