the foiled attempt

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I left his house, CD in hand It was 11:45 he was desperate from what i could understand I was bigger then him but he followed me he looked lightly built and slim he clapped behind me as i walked past the park without any lights this would mean trouble that i could see he shouted something inadiable behind my back he ran towords me i hoped that was that he whisperd in my ear "hey kid wanna play?" i turned around and looked down i thought yes, why not play a punch to the face then to the head he fell down I punched him again he was out a shame he had no money in his wallet

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October 8, 2005 11:24hidden

this is a true story, Last night i went to my friends house and sure enough i was attcked by him. I couldn't quite work in his punch but surfice to say he got a kicking. I meant to make this last night when i got back but my dad wouldn't let my on the PC :(

October 10, 2005 14:16Lora

woa
thats a really good... and slightly scary
i like it :)

October 10, 2005 14:17Lora

woa
thats a really good... and slightly scary
i like it :)