dont know a name..english hmwk

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By look how pretty she is when she falls down... •

When the light of day has grown dim and all I Think of, times spent with you and waiting by The promise of tomorrow, my tears dried. All my life I've waited, and now I hide My thoughts from you, fearing what the future holds. My tears grace the pages, words that are cold They flow from the depts of my soul but I continuously fall in a rut. Break free of the ropes that are binding me And to live the life I was meant to be. I'm running in this never ending race Abandon all hope of ever leaving this place; My piece of hope, my only joy, open my eyes Tear me away from this world's evil lies. :english stuff... gold stars if you can tell me how its written..::

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October 18, 2005 20:03~*PuRely*DeVine*~

and so we have come to the last poem..i really enjoyed reading all of your work and i will definately be looking out for more..you have a brilliant mind...many people are going to come along that challenge how much you can withstand, my advice is to prove them you are stronger than the ignorance they lay upon you...

your poetry is beautiful and added to the many that i love is this one...keep writing and keep your head up because you are your own best friend you are the only person you will spend the rest of your life with...good luck on your writings, keep your dreams alive...

October 20, 2005 23:04Faith

I like it!! It just flows seemlessly from one line to another! Is it in iambic pentametre?