Summer Rain(5), by ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~
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With my awakening,and a summer scent in the air,I was
startled and jolted from a sweet veil of prayer.
I was about to turn backward to gather my things, when the
well in the backyard begin to sing.
Some are so far away and some are so close,no one can tell
by the look of the eye,but can always feel it when they
merly pass by.
Some who are wondering and those who no doubt,will end
this soul searching with quiet a loud shout.I may not be
near when the excitment begins but i'll never go far and
not come back again.
There is wonder and laughter and simplicity, all hovering
above us ,the night's Majesty!No time to stop and to seal
this open door,when the rivers are springing right up
through the floor.
© Copyright Gloria/glostarg
(8-11-04)
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Posted: 2009-08-28 19:28:52 UTC |
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2006-01-18 15:50:54 | Kirsty (living in the light) |
I like this poem very well written. I also like the line sweet veil of prayer you wouldnt mind if i used that line in a story. Furthermore, my exams are going well now. I want to do something with my life you know do what Gods wants. |
2006-05-09 23:29:21 | Faith |
I love this poem Gloria! Oh yeah, and i am back from Thailand... thus the lack of emails and comments. I've got some catching up to do, eh? |
2007-02-13 05:36:16 | Chalan |
I thought that this poem was great! |
2008-01-19 08:42:33 | *Psychopathic Child* |
this poem is amazing i like it its very well written. P.S. thanks for you feedback on my Elements of Destiny poem, most people don't understand it, i can understand why its very confusing in many ways. |
2009-06-07 17:57:23 | marsha |
I love this, I will read again |