Summer Rain(5)

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By <font color= "white"> ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

<font color="navy"><i><b> With my awakening,and a summer scent in the air,I was startled and jolted from a sweet veil of prayer. I was about to turn backward to gather my things, when the well in the backyard begin to sing. Some are so far away and some are so close,no one can tell by the look of the eye,but can always feel it when they merly pass by. Some who are wondering and those who no doubt,will end this soul searching with quiet a loud shout.I may not be near when the excitment begins but i'll never go far and not come back again. There is wonder and laughter and simplicity, all hovering above us ,the night's Majesty!No time to stop and to seal this open door,when the rivers are springing right up through the floor. © Copyright Gloria/glostarg (8-11-04)

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January 18, 2006 15:50 Kirsty (living in the light)

I like this poem very well written. I also like the line sweet veil of prayer you wouldnt mind if i used that line in a story. Furthermore, my exams are going well now. I want to do something with my life you know do what Gods wants.

May 9, 2006 23:29Faith

I love this poem Gloria! Oh yeah, and i am back from Thailand... thus the lack of emails and comments. I've got some catching up to do, eh?

February 13, 2007 05:36Chalan

I thought that this poem was great!

January 19, 2008 08:42*Psychopathic Child*

this poem is amazing i like it its very well written. P.S. thanks for you feedback on my Elements of Destiny poem, most people don't understand it, i can understand why its very confusing in many ways.

June 7, 2009 17:57marsha

I love this, I will read again