Poetic Affection, by honesty_kills Subscribe to rss feed for honesty_kills 

People say that love hurts
I'm willing to take that chance.
Somehoe though, I'm not afraid
because this affection is like a dance.

People say we are so young
To actually know love that is true.
I understand why they say this
Because those who love, are those too few.

A tender kiss
An intimate hug
My world is such a bliss.
Nothing will take me away.

Nothing can compare to you
As if I'd ever try
And if I ever found someone
I would break down and cry.

I know this poem is sappy
But it comes straight from my heart
I know my choice of words is crappy
But hey, this love poem is a start.
Posted: 2005-01-31 20:20:02 UTC
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2005-08-24 15:10:55a rose by any otha name
awww a love poem, eventually we all write one I like one and all love poems are sappy no matter how hard we try to make it not sound sappy

2006-04-27 16:25:04lost the lonely dead
well you chose a good name, if you want to transmorm it to something creative i would suggest generalizing or trying to show pictures rather then using a lot of I's make it seem less personal but not...the best poems have no or little referance to ones self (this is all my opinion mind you) its a good start i would say but it just feels unfinished