Poetic Affection

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By honesty_kills •

People say that love hurts I'm willing to take that chance. Somehoe though, I'm not afraid because this affection is like a dance. People say we are so young To actually know love that is true. I understand why they say this Because those who love, are those too few. A tender kiss An intimate hug My world is such a bliss. Nothing will take me away. Nothing can compare to you As if I'd ever try And if I ever found someone I would break down and cry. I know this poem is sappy But it comes straight from my heart I know my choice of words is crappy But hey, this love poem is a start.

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August 24, 2005 15:10a rose by any otha name

awww a love poem, eventually we all write one I like one and all love poems are sappy no matter how hard we try to make it not sound sappy

April 27, 2006 16:25lost the lonely dead

well you chose a good name, if you want to transmorm it to something creative i would suggest generalizing or trying to show pictures rather then using a lot of I's make it seem less personal but not...the best poems have no or little referance to ones self (this is all my opinion mind you) its a good start i would say but it just feels unfinished