Untitled (For Billie)

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By Beautifully_Chaotic

Holding the pen in a shakey grasp splintering lullaby of broken glass Placid betrayal of silence in death head on my pillow watching her rest sleep now, my love safe from the world hold you in my arms just a little girl in a field of broken dreams among hate,a subtle rage please be my little fist of love to beat my lonely cage

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October 26, 2005 00:47waterlily

one of the strangest poems i have ever read

October 26, 2005 04:37Beautifully_Chaotic

Thank you for your comment. I appriciate you taking the time to read my poem. Is (my poem being) strange a good thing or a bad thing in your opinion?

October 26, 2005 15:03Mirashteb

strange? hmm.. taht's cuz you interpret in ure own way i guess..

October 27, 2005 04:00bedazzled

I really like it, waterlily's comments are off the radar

October 28, 2005 22:10waterlily

i wrote a poem about broken glass myself months ago.so that was a bit spooky.i broke the glass myself out of rage and motherly desperation.so your two lines including lullaby and shattering glass was most disturbing to read in print.a strange intimacy indeed.little fist of love? beat my lonely cage?Bondage and Discipline and good old fashioned Slavery. knot sure if it is good or bad per se.sometimes emotions are more than black and white terms since feelings are more than cut and dry when you cry.or dont allow yourself to cry.this is a scary poem.

October 31, 2005 17:56.xx:+.Disposable.Darling.+:xx.

interesting use of words, it's very enticing.. but i don't think i quite understand what this one is about :S. it would be most helpful if you could give me some explaination on it and then i could give a better comment. love michelle.

November 5, 2005 16:48Beautifully_Chaotic

I don't know If I should tell what this is actually about. It might spoil the debate, and all of your ideas. Don't over think it. In my opinion its really simple. This poem is about my dog Billie (who I had for 16 years.) I wrote it when she died last December. It's just how her death and how it made me feel.

November 13, 2005 04:45Crzy Angelchic

interesting really. but good. thanks for reading mine as well.

December 6, 2005 07:54Spiritual Beauty

:)

January 20, 2006 21:39. QUEENIE .

its beautiful any way you look at it, i enjoyed it immensly.

August 28, 2006 22:05.:side:walk:.

I go through irritble dark times too, this keeps me close and it's powerful. I agree with bedazzle, yes waterlily, your comments are really really truley wonderful!

August 28, 2006 22:16.:side:walk:.

waterlily kinda writes horney poems...