[Stolen Emotion], by Beautifully_Chaotic
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what have you done?
a black cloud of misery as sentiments diminish.
once we savored bliss,
hand in hand and untainted,
but your thirst drifted away.
a painful fever of lies -
tears follow pain, follow night,
love bled dry.
in a storm of sorrow,
i still love you. |
| Posted: 2005-10-24 18:56:07 UTC |
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| 2005-10-31 17:52:07 | .xx:+.Disposable.Darling.+:xx. |
| short but sweet! loves hurts i know.. keep your chin up sweetz.. there is always another light at the end of the tunnel.. and definitely always another guy too :). --michelle. |
| 2005-11-05 16:51:14 | Beautifully_Chaotic |
| Thanks. Your so sweet! I Know that there are other guys, I get that part of it. Getting another guy isn't an issue. Its getting over the last guy that's the extremely hard part! |
| 2006-02-10 06:45:32 | . QUEENIE . |
| heh thats true. awesome poem, really can relate i think... are you the same Beautifully Chaotic from MySpace? (jw.) |
| 2008-01-10 01:45:03 | Sheila |
| Love brings all kinds of different emotions.Usually the last and hardest emotion of them all is pain. The strangest and sickest twist of these emotions is. Thats usually what makes a story or poem great.Someone once told me.Pain is how we know we're alive.
Sad and sorry to admit this. I accidently deleted your comment and my poem . I have reposted my poems and would really appreciate it,if you would repost your comments. Reading them lifted my spirits.Which is something every one could use from time to time. |