His Eyes (Part One)

By LaShawnna • October 30, 2005 16:33 UTC

His eyes are like the sea when the high tide is coming in, when they are filled with rage they are like the sea during a thunderstorm. When he is sad his eyes are like the sea spilling into another sea.When he is jealous his eyes are like the sea crashing against the rocks.When he is in love his eyes are like the sea during a hurricane because he loves with all he has.His eyes say everything about him.

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November 9, 2005 01:35waterlily

his eyes sound passionatelee blue to me...why is your man all ways stomping around in rage though?he must fill with rage first.must B his first gut reaction to anything that's what is appearing in print...high tide? lol...thunderstorm..ah ...electricity and force of nature! i wonder what makes hymn sad...it makes me curious...he must love the sea most of all...his nature must B to understand jealousy from within first i think...hurricane? lol
does he love with all he has?oh my! luckey you! his eyes say everything about hymn makes me think of someone I once knew in childhood.we loved each other with our eyes!we couldnt help it...lol