One Blow

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By LaShawnna

He knocked her to the ground with just one blow of his fist.She was feeling dizzy but she knew he wouldn't stop there.He reached down and pulled her up by her hair. He raised his fist this time connecting it to her stomach, she went down and began to vomit she had no will power to live, because he had taken that away months before with just one blow.She wished she would've listened to her friends, but she didn't because she thought she loved him.The cocking of a gun brought her back to reality, then she saw the gun pointed at her head, then he pulled the trigger and it killed her with just one blow

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November 2, 2005 03:30FakeLaughter31

wow.....nice job ^_-

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November 5, 2005 22:30waterlily

sounds like a mercy killing

November 7, 2005 05:41Unknown

load of shit