This Is Our Destiny.

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By .xx:+.Disposable.Darling.+:xx. •

i'm not sure how it's done. lightly spun and quickly cloaking pressed against these blood-stained walls i'm stunned and choking on your beautiful presence. lost in you i feel my innocence and the suspense of you inching closer. as you take my breath and lock it in around your belt i swear you never felt me. but you continue to tell me it was worth your time. out of body and out of mind i have to wonder was it really worth mine? seeing stars; i'm still that far. i don't know where we are. should this have become black and white? should we have started to fight and forget those shades of grey? it was always all inside i still insist to try and hide. i know you know and i know it shows. can't this burden just be my own? the emotional cuts and the bleeding masses the irredescent glow of your smile; the way society clashes. i know it's all there but you make it seem that much more real. you're always looking up and you'll never find me there. you're too high up now and i know you'll never care. even if you glanced down you wouldn't find me around; i'm too far underground. buried alive waiting for this pain to subside it's killing me.. and you'll never see but i know this our destiny.. oh, sweetheart. this is our destiny sweetheart. and it's ripping me apart.

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March 28, 2005 14:14lacebutterflies

beautiful and deep

April 2, 2005 21:39strange girl.

you can't say that. We make our choices and then there is destiny. In love we are on the same platform. When you have come this far how can you go back in despair, we have reached the end of the tunnel and all I can see is light upon light.

August 3, 2005 16:30.xx:+.Disposable.Darling.+:xx.

just commenting back to "strange girl". nowhere in my poem does it say anything about making choices. it's about a relationship, and just falling into things that happen within that relationship and looking back on it and having mixed feelings and then knowing in the end that it's destiny. it was meant to happen. there was no choice. that's just the way things were meant to be.

August 26, 2005 19:04tryin ta hide

THIS POME IS AMAZING

December 1, 2005 04:22 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Ah! Destiny! wow!You are a good writer! I just love the way you write!This poem is deep! lots of things may need to die in one's life, but not the person. There are many ways of dying out to things and not loose the body we live in here.I am thankful your alive to write beautiful words for us to read on here!