open up your eyes!

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By pain never stops •

im happy but im sad im alone but poeple are near you see this person that isnt really here its an illusion a figment of yur mind you will have to look deeper to find theres an invisble mask one which people cnt see open up yur eyes and take a closer look look deeper, deeper within and tell me what do you see i see a girl a girl whos trapped wants to let free but doesnt know how shes trapped in lies poeple pretending around open up yur eyes she isnt perfect shes far from it shes just who she wants to be shes in denial cant face the facts is it actually real or is it just a dream take a closer look open up yur eyes and take a closer look look deeper and maybe u will find, but it will be hard!!

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November 2, 2005 20:26My_pain_your_thrill

You keep going on about looking deeper, but no one can look deep enough to see past what you want them to see. If you want to be seen, I mean REALLY seen, then stop pretending, you want me and Stacey to know you better, and talk to you more, but no matter what we do or say, you say we dont understand or weve 'not been there.' But we do understand, and we have been in our own hell. We are trying to be a good friend to you, really trying, but ignoring us in class and sending us coded messages doesnt help!! If you want to be seen, look inward first. We know what is inside us, now please stop with the 'look deeper' texts. If you want us as friends, you need to make the effort too!! Shutting us out doesn't push us away! xoxoxox

November 13, 2005 02:22Mr.Poet

Interesting good with words

November 18, 2005 03:00Mr.Poet

hey thanks for the compliments like i said you have a way with words

July 31, 2006 06:07User

Uhh..sorry..sorry..mind me asking..some
kinda communication is going on here..??