my tears are genuine

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By waterlily •

my tears are genuine perhaps i am knot your heroin but when i cry honey my tears are just like money my tears are genuine even if i can knot win i feel the pain deep down inside even when you tan my hide my tears are genuine even if i can knot kick u in the shin it comes from the deepest part of me even if i cry a sea my tears are genuine even if i dont know how 2 beggin my heart breaks every time i have to cry makes me weak and wanna die

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November 3, 2005 05:33Dy'mond (yup yup goon)

i think u should chose your words wisely!!I understand your words, but u should chose different words, to make the poem make sense. but i do like it. I give you a 5

September 1, 2006 07:15User

It seems like all your words are very random..you should give a thought before putting your expressions in words..well..maybe you won't care..??