The Unknown World, by Charlie
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Walking through the veil, as if walking through a door. I
find everything that I love and everthing I don't. I find
my dearest friends standing there waiting for me, to take
the lead over a world that has become broken. And as I take
the responsibility willingly, I am saddened to see I have no
help, for my friends are broken as well. As life goes on in
this little world of mine, fighting back tears and fighting
forward against trials,I take on one more. The need to find
someone to stand beside me. Someone to love this world as
much as I have come to love it. And when I find him, I will
not have to change it alone. And as I live this role in
this world, my heart and it becomes one.
Then without any warning, I am snatched from it. And as I
lay in my bed, thinking of the life that I lived in my
world. I wonder what role I am to play in the real world. |
| Posted: 2005-11-04 13:23:25 UTC |
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| 2005-11-05 15:21:31 | a rose by any otha name |
| spectacular, new twist at the end I didn't expect that with the intro, well done |
| 2005-11-05 21:28:03 | waterlily |
| a veil becomes a door,an avenue...leading over a broken world?..ah yes the word "willingly" ...i notice...trials and tears go hand in hand with brokeness...who could love such a world in truth though? one could only endure...is really what you mean to say...isnt most change alone ?hmm?snatch...meaningfull word it is indeed... |
| 2006-04-09 04:07:34 | Mr.Poet |
| hey thanks charlie this is a great poem yea feel free to use my poems i am glad you liked the one it is a good one and i like it alot so be good to it haha you are a good writer really i dont look the role but i love to write |
| 2006-10-11 01:37:41 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
| broken people in a broken world..it does have a ring of truth to it as our world is today. Nice poem. |