The Unknown World

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By Charlie •

Walking through the veil, as if walking through a door. I find everything that I love and everthing I don't. I find my dearest friends standing there waiting for me, to take the lead over a world that has become broken. And as I take the responsibility willingly, I am saddened to see I have no help, for my friends are broken as well. As life goes on in this little world of mine, fighting back tears and fighting forward against trials,I take on one more. The need to find someone to stand beside me. Someone to love this world as much as I have come to love it. And when I find him, I will not have to change it alone. And as I live this role in this world, my heart and it becomes one. Then without any warning, I am snatched from it. And as I lay in my bed, thinking of the life that I lived in my world. I wonder what role I am to play in the real world.

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November 5, 2005 15:21a rose by any otha name

spectacular, new twist at the end I didn't expect that with the intro, well done

November 5, 2005 21:28waterlily

a veil becomes a door,an avenue...leading over a broken world?..ah yes the word "willingly" ...i notice...trials and tears go hand in hand with brokeness...who could love such a world in truth though? one could only endure...is really what you mean to say...isnt most change alone ?hmm?snatch...meaningfull word it is indeed...

November 9, 2005 04:39Telperinon

*sigh* Very nice.

November 20, 2005 22:19wishing_on_stars

Splendid

April 9, 2006 04:07Mr.Poet

hey thanks charlie this is a great poem yea feel free to use my poems i am glad you liked the one it is a good one and i like it alot so be good to it haha you are a good writer really i dont look the role but i love to write

October 11, 2006 01:37 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

broken people in a broken world..it does have a ring of truth to it as our world is today. Nice poem.

July 15, 2009 12:32miss insashable

great write