Under My Flag I Stand Proud, by Loneliness is condescending
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America a vast conspiracy to make you happy
Morals?
They’ve fallen out of favor
What need is something that constricts
Holds us to some higher stander
What’s that you just said?
Your don’t believe in God?
Then by God no one should
How inconsiderate we are to even believe in such an
offensive being
That?
A worthless document that’s growing dust
Out of date how could that work for this day in age
I am my own
Right and wrong is what I say
Does that offend you?
I’m sorry but your not today’s minority
Leave us be in our vanity
America’s becoming prom queen
She gave away her purity to everyone
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| Posted: 2005-11-05 06:28:08 UTC |
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| 2005-11-24 04:58:39 | lost the lonely dead |
| i dislike the poem and yet it is true in many ways and undeniable, truely sad anyway i think im going to write one with a different tune but a similar name and we'll see what we think of the two....the last line was really a good one but im not sure i like some of the attitude the poem has...(no offence) i just wish we could strive to make it better yet i know tis a ship with a giant hole in it and theres not much can be done |