Perfect Love(48)

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By <font color= "white"> ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

<font color="navy"> <I><b> To wake in the morning, with the sun in your face. not the best of awakenings ,but your love I can take! The natural sweetness of lying next to you,the silk of your body just lying there nude. I watch you and wonder how that destiny unfolds, not a moment too soon though, I am here now to hold, The love of my life and the mate of my soul,with the greatest of love our forever unfolds. Time warp of magnitude has cleared us the way, and offered a space in a brand new day.one moment of regret will not be in our mind, and a loving companion will meld our two times. The spirit of love whose agile, and fresh will accompany our journey into our soft nest. while touches and caresses are familiar regime,albeit that which never yet been theme. According to logic and past dreams of love, our path of life is written from above.I love you with more than intensity can show,and I paint our love magic, this i'm sure you know! On wings of an eagle you carried me safe to that haven of rest of our love and future sake.I'm enthralled and captivated with you, the look in your eyes tells of our love and how true. In magic awakenings, the passion does arise, with out a word but,the look in your eyes.knowing my love is welcome and given to you true,and my lips are full with caresses of you. tell me of a love more perfect than this, and I'll promise you another thousand year kiss! 2005© Copyright Gloria /glostarg

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April 14, 2005 15:12Depressed_des

I like this poem as i love someone at the moment...even if they do not know it yet.

April 17, 2005 01:04jaime

I really like this poem. The emotion that comes from it is overwhelming and I encourage you to keep writing, you obviously have talent.

April 27, 2005 05:25 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Dear Depressed_des,
have heart! and love with everything in you! surely the other will find your love on the beautiful wings of hope.glostarg

April 27, 2005 05:29 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Dear jaime,
Thank you for you warm and encouraging words.I am happy that you liked my poem .Thank you for your feedback.
glostarg

July 14, 2005 04:40ladycalvert

This poem shows a lot of heart. I love it.

July 27, 2005 23:56**Samara********

This poem was mad crazy

August 10, 2005 18:11Heart-Less

i like tis poem because it reminds me as myself. keep writing.

November 20, 2005 18:10a rose by any otha name

I love the message in the poem very sweet it brings me back to days when I felt lost in love's bliss

December 25, 2005 23:14Crimson.Wings

Thank u 4 commenting on my poems. i love this poem, u are really good at writing poems.

February 6, 2006 22:25Innocent until proven Guilty

Your poem or short story is really good I can relate to it. Keep it up. Good job!

February 24, 2006 00:19.:side:walk:.

Wow, I am soooooo speachless, it makes me want to be in love soooooo bad! Its focuses on the positive side of love,with trust and its filled with sincereity!
- Mandy

December 29, 2006 19:15Chalan

Very well written. It takes a person back to the time when they first fell in love with someone.

January 2, 2007 23:28Chalan

Very well written!!

January 12, 2007 22:36fallén

this is so good , ty G1ostarg

January 20, 2007 02:59sk8t3R gal 4 eva

this is such a good poem. i love all of the poems you have written! this is one of my favorites that you have written. keep on believing! have faith in everything! stay strong. oh and keep writting poems too. they are great!!!

January 24, 2007 17:33~*PuRely*DeVine*~

wow this is beautiful thank you for commenting on my poems that really means a lot to me

February 27, 2007 05:46liberty moon

hi i dnt knw u at all but i feel like u would be a gr8 help in my quest for answers. u knw when bad things happen and we get hurt we always ask the question where was God and the answer we get is He was there. my question is one i've been battling with for a while. where is there? please pray abt it and email me at. [email protected]. thank u and God bless

February 28, 2007 07:38 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Hi Liberty Moon I emailed you the answer. Glo

March 19, 2007 05:41Angel of Music

Great Job! I reaaly like this poem.

March 28, 2007 10:16FarmGirl

nice

May 24, 2007 17:49Teresa

WOW!!!! THATS GREAT I REALLY LIKED IT KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK

May 30, 2007 13:34Chuck Shorter

Dear Gloria,
You are definitely a poet par excellence,of that I have no doubt.I also want to thank you for that lovely feedback, it's a poem in itself. Don't let this tremendous talent go to waste; publish your stuff ASAP {if you haven't already}. God bless and wish you the best of everything in life.
Luv
Chuck

lovvvvvvvvvve it!

October 3, 2007 14:34Anthony Cardon

This poem is just amazing! I'm surprised by your use of words that flow smoothly in a graceful pattern that creates a poetic quality without the use of rhyming. Very well done!

October 11, 2007 00:47♥breauna♥

your are really good..juss to let you know..lol

October 26, 2007 23:10Linda G.

Hi Gloria- Thank you for sharing you lovely poetry. I am very touched by your thoughts and feelings.Best wishes to you..Linda G

November 21, 2007 04:15Firec

beautiful. please read some of my work as well :]

December 27, 2007 05:54Anthony Cardon

The emotion expressed in this poem seems to really seep out of the soul like the paper is a sponge against your heart. Wonderful!

January 5, 2008 04:45Sheila

That is really beautiful!

January 31, 2008 03:25Anthony Cardon

Absolutely beautiful!

February 16, 2008 11:01Invisible Poet

i dont understand what you meant about my poem plz explain thnx

February 21, 2008 08:44Invisible Poet

thnx for all the comments and im glad at least one person like my poems

May 22, 2008 08:19 SOUMYA ( RAWKSTAR )

REELY KEWL

May 25, 2008 19:57Annie B. SnowRaven

Amazing... !!!!!!

October 29, 2008 06:40Invisible Poet

Have a new poem that might appeal to your tastes (Birth) let me know what you think please

December 8, 2008 10:43LostChild

Amazing poem!!!

January 25, 2009 03:45Natural_beauty_Ashe

i love this its like so much expressed in not so many words

March 7, 2009 21:22SAMIRA JONES

I LIKE THIS POEM ALOT..YOU PUT YOUR HEART IN THIS ONE BECAUSE I FELT YOUR EMOTIOMS. THE WORDS YOU USED MADE THE WHOLE POEM SO UNIQUE..YOU HAVE A BRIGHT FUTRE KEEP GOING. KEEP WRITTEN AND EXPESSING...GOOD LUCK

June 26, 2009 00:59ash

it's just.
incredible.

August 6, 2009 19:48♥ Leah ☺

beautiful! i wish i could give you a 10

October 30, 2009 19:57Moon

Tis thee's epic very well done. Thou hopes to find more poets like thee.

November 7, 2009 00:26//Stillsilent//

that was amazing!! ure a natrual.

December 6, 2009 06:21~♥miss crazy♥~

i like this poem it is the best and it is emotional and i love it.

December 20, 2009 09:08dispersed_sky

oh glostarg ur so awsum ....!!!!!!!!1st of all.congratulation u gt9 rating frm ma side...(smile)..and from now ill b a frequent reader for ur poems...i think that ur such a good writer..u can b an inspiration fr ppl like me.....(hehehe) wat else..u roxx nd keep roxin

April 15, 2010 19:12Gabrielle

Beautiful....

April 25, 2010 04:13B3(k$_Broken13

this is sucha great poem. keep writing you obviously have talent. i mean if this is what you love.. then go for it.. you seem so wise and smart about what you say.. i hope you dont mind by me asking this but.. i need help with my own poetry.. and i was wondering if you could read some of mine.. and let me know what you think or you can email me at [email protected] i really would appreciate your help. thanks.. and great job on this one

May 19, 2010 04:15~Angela~

thats awesome!!!how u get the color 2 change?!sweet.keeep doin wat ur doin on here!-rose juliette`

May 28, 2010 02:57Gemali

What an amazing poem! I like it, i agree wiht past comments you do have a reall talent and I find it impressive that you were able to ryme a poem like this. Keep writing

July 9, 2010 02:30

Your are a really good poet
this is beautiful and describes the place of new love...

July 20, 2010 18:08Gabrielle

beautiful.

June 22, 2011 18:13sushil bansal

God bless you. You have a wonderful soul.I always like to read your poems. sheel didi

June 22, 2011 18:14sushil bansal

God bless you. You have a wonderful soul.I always like to read your poems. sheel didi

December 21, 2013 12:11Chuck Shorter

I see true love, passion, tenderness and honesty all rolled into one! this piece of work is "MAGNIFIQUE!"

August 13, 2014 04:28Natural_beauty_Ashe

Beautiful and pure emotion I love it