Perfect Love(48), by ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ "> |
To wake in the morning, with the sun in your face. not the best of awakenings ,but your love I can take! The natural sweetness of lying next to you,the silk of your body just lying there nude. I watch you and wonder how that destiny unfolds, not a moment too soon though, I am here now to hold, The love of my life and the mate of my soul,with the greatest of love our forever unfolds. Time warp of magnitude has cleared us the way, and offered a space in a brand new day.one moment of regret will not be in our mind, and a loving companion will meld our two times. The spirit of love whose agile, and fresh will accompany our journey into our soft nest. while touches and caresses are familiar regime,albeit that which never yet been theme. According to logic and past dreams of love, our path of life is written from above.I love you with more than intensity can show,and I paint our love magic, this i'm sure you know! On wings of an eagle you carried me safe to that haven of rest of our love and future sake.I'm enthralled and captivated with you, the look in your eyes tells of our love and how true. In magic awakenings, the passion does arise, with out a word but,the look in your eyes.knowing my love is welcome and given to you true,and my lips are full with caresses of you. tell me of a love more perfect than this, and I'll promise you another thousand year kiss! 2005© Copyright Gloria /glostarg |
Posted: 2010-06-19 01:43:39 UTC |
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2005-04-14 15:12:21 | Depressed_des |
I like this poem as i love someone at the moment...even if they do not know it yet. |
2005-04-17 01:04:38 | jaime |
I really like this poem. The emotion that comes from it is overwhelming and I encourage you to keep writing, you obviously have talent. |
2005-04-27 05:25:39 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
Dear Depressed_des, have heart! and love with everything in you! surely the other will find your love on the beautiful wings of hope.glostarg |
2005-04-27 05:29:16 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
Dear jaime, Thank you for you warm and encouraging words.I am happy that you liked my poem .Thank you for your feedback. glostarg |
2005-07-14 04:40:11 | ladycalvert |
This poem shows a lot of heart. I love it. |
2005-07-27 23:56:58 | **Samara******** |
This poem was mad crazy |
2005-08-10 18:11:36 | Heart-Less |
i like tis poem because it reminds me as myself. keep writing. |
2005-11-20 18:10:54 | a rose by any otha name |
I love the message in the poem very sweet it brings me back to days when I felt lost in love's bliss |
2005-12-25 23:14:37 | Crimson.Wings |
Thank u 4 commenting on my poems. i love this poem, u are really good at writing poems. |
2006-02-06 22:25:27 | Innocent until proven Guilty |
Your poem or short story is really good I can relate to it. Keep it up. Good job! |
2006-02-24 00:19:22 | .:side:walk:. |
Wow, I am soooooo speachless, it makes me want to be in love soooooo bad! Its focuses on the positive side of love,with trust and its filled with sincereity! - Mandy |
2006-12-29 19:15:27 | Chalan |
Very well written. It takes a person back to the time when they first fell in love with someone. |
2007-01-02 23:28:11 | Chalan |
Very well written!! |
2007-01-12 22:36:40 | fallén |
this is so good , ty G1ostarg |
2007-01-20 02:59:42 | sk8t3R gal 4 eva |
this is such a good poem. i love all of the poems you have written! this is one of my favorites that you have written. keep on believing! have faith in everything! stay strong. oh and keep writting poems too. they are great!!! |
2007-01-24 17:33:17 | ~*PuRely*DeVine*~ |
wow this is beautiful thank you for commenting on my poems that really means a lot to me |
2007-02-27 05:46:01 | liberty moon |
hi i dnt knw u at all but i feel like u would be a gr8 help in my quest for answers. u knw when bad things happen and we get hurt we always ask the question where was God and the answer we get is He was there. my question is one i've been battling with for a while. where is there? please pray abt it and email me at. [email protected]. thank u and God bless |
2007-02-28 07:38:44 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
Hi Liberty Moon I emailed you the answer. Glo |
2007-03-19 05:41:11 | Angel of Music |
Great Job! I reaaly like this poem. |
2007-03-28 10:16:52 | FarmGirl |
nice |
2007-05-24 17:49:43 | Teresa |
WOW!!!! THATS GREAT I REALLY LIKED IT KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK |
2007-05-30 13:34:53 | Chuck Shorter |
Dear Gloria, You are definitely a poet par excellence,of that I have no doubt.I also want to thank you for that lovely feedback, it's a poem in itself. Don't let this tremendous talent go to waste; publish your stuff ASAP {if you haven't already}. God bless and wish you the best of everything in life. Luv Chuck |
2007-07-26 00:46:26 | a rose by any other name would hurt just as bad. |
lovvvvvvvvvve it! |
2007-10-03 14:34:47 | Anthony Cardon |
This poem is just amazing! I'm surprised by your use of words that flow smoothly in a graceful pattern that creates a poetic quality without the use of rhyming. Very well done! |
2007-10-11 00:47:56 | ♥breauna♥ |
your are really good..juss to let you know..lol |
2007-10-26 23:10:06 | Linda G. |
Hi Gloria- Thank you for sharing you lovely poetry. I am very touched by your thoughts and feelings.Best wishes to you..Linda G |
2007-11-21 04:15:29 | Firec |
beautiful. please read some of my work as well :] |
2007-12-27 05:54:51 | Anthony Cardon |
The emotion expressed in this poem seems to really seep out of the soul like the paper is a sponge against your heart. Wonderful! |
2008-01-05 04:45:14 | Sheila |
That is really beautiful! |
2008-01-31 03:25:16 | Anthony Cardon |
Absolutely beautiful! |
2008-02-16 11:01:22 | Invisible Poet |
i dont understand what you meant about my poem plz explain thnx |
2008-02-21 08:44:15 | Invisible Poet |
thnx for all the comments and im glad at least one person like my poems |
2008-05-22 08:19:37 | SOUMYA ( RAWKSTAR ) |
REELY KEWL |
2008-05-25 19:57:01 | Annie B. SnowRaven |
Amazing... !!!!!! |
2008-10-29 06:40:35 | Invisible Poet |
Have a new poem that might appeal to your tastes (Birth) let me know what you think please |
2008-12-08 10:43:13 | LostChild |
Amazing poem!!! |
2009-01-25 03:45:03 | Natural_beauty_Ashe |
i love this its like so much expressed in not so many words |
2009-03-07 21:22:22 | SAMIRA JONES |
I LIKE THIS POEM ALOT..YOU PUT YOUR HEART IN THIS ONE BECAUSE I FELT YOUR EMOTIOMS. THE WORDS YOU USED MADE THE WHOLE POEM SO UNIQUE..YOU HAVE A BRIGHT FUTRE KEEP GOING. KEEP WRITTEN AND EXPESSING...GOOD LUCK |
2009-06-26 00:59:59 | ash |
it's just. incredible. |
2009-08-06 19:48:21 | ♥ Leah ☺ |
beautiful! i wish i could give you a 10 |
2009-10-30 19:57:44 | Moon |
Tis thee's epic very well done. Thou hopes to find more poets like thee. |
2009-11-07 00:26:30 | //Stillsilent// |
that was amazing!! ure a natrual. |
2009-12-06 06:21:22 | ~♥miss crazy♥~ |
i like this poem it is the best and it is emotional and i love it. |
2009-12-20 09:08:15 | dispersed_sky |
oh glostarg ur so awsum ....!!!!!!!!1st of all.congratulation u gt9 rating frm ma side...(smile)..and from now ill b a frequent reader for ur poems...i think that ur such a good writer..u can b an inspiration fr ppl like me.....(hehehe) wat else..u roxx nd keep roxin |
2010-04-15 19:12:38 | Gabrielle |
Beautiful.... |
2010-04-25 04:13:44 | B3(k$_Broken13 |
this is sucha great poem. keep writing you obviously have talent. i mean if this is what you love.. then go for it.. you seem so wise and smart about what you say.. i hope you dont mind by me asking this but.. i need help with my own poetry.. and i was wondering if you could read some of mine.. and let me know what you think or you can email me at [email protected] i really would appreciate your help. thanks.. and great job on this one |
2010-05-19 04:15:29 | ~Angela~ |
thats awesome!!!how u get the color 2 change?!sweet.keeep doin wat ur doin on here!-rose juliette` |
2010-05-28 02:57:45 | Gemali |
What an amazing poem! I like it, i agree wiht past comments you do have a reall talent and I find it impressive that you were able to ryme a poem like this. Keep writing |
2010-07-09 02:30:34 | |
Your are a really good poet this is beautiful and describes the place of new love... |
2010-07-20 18:08:03 | Gabrielle |
beautiful. |
2011-06-22 18:13:32 | sushil bansal |
God bless you. You have a wonderful soul.I always like to read your poems. sheel didi |
2011-06-22 18:14:19 | sushil bansal |
God bless you. You have a wonderful soul.I always like to read your poems. sheel didi |
2013-12-21 12:11:57 | Chuck Shorter |
I see true love, passion, tenderness and honesty all rolled into one! this piece of work is "MAGNIFIQUE!" |
2014-08-13 04:28:47 | Natural_beauty_Ashe |
Beautiful and pure emotion I love it |