On The 13th Floor

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By Hope in A Bottle •

There aint no door, On the 13th floor, And I aint Looking Anymore. It's just not there, And I don't care, Been looking for that door everywhere. And so I fell, Into the pits of hell, Satan stood before me And he said "Well.. ..Boy you better raise your head. Or I'll make sure that you stay dead." I said "I don't care! I don't wanna go on living. The door aint there And I can't be forgiven. He Said "That's not how you play the game" But I didn't care I want to end this pain. There aint no door, On the 13th floor, And I aint Looking Anymore. It's just not there, And I don't care, Been looking for that door everywhere. I've went too deep Could fall asleep Will anyone weep? Hell's Not A Place. Hell's A state of Mind. Heavens an Illusion That we never can Find. A stared at him And heard him cry "Having no reason to live, Is no reason to die." (Again more of a song)

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November 18, 2005 16:11Faith

I love the last 2 lines... very powerful! Good work, i like the flow of it, i wonder what it would sound like as a song...

November 21, 2005 20:19Amy Mc

I think its a good poem. I don't understand if the satin is your friend or enemy?