Thinking of you on a rainy day., by JessicaxCore
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My love for you is an overcast of thick clouds on a rainy
day,
Pouring my emotions on this paper like a hurricane storms
over the sea,
Your face is a beam of yellow sunlight through the deep dark
clouds,
But that beautiful light fades away as those clouds roll
back in. |
| Posted: 2005-11-14 23:33:23 UTC |
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| 2005-11-29 17:21:15 | so_close_but_yetso_far |
| try having less sylables on a line. EG
My love for you is an overcast of thick clouds
on a rainy day,
Pouring my emotions on this paper,
like a hurricane storms over the sea,
Your face is a beam of yellow sunlight,
through the deep dark clouds,
But that beautiful light fades away,
as those clouds roll back in.
Good poem, you are talented. |