Thinking of you on a rainy day.

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By <font color=teal>JessicaxCore</font> •

My love for you is an overcast of thick clouds on a rainy day, Pouring my emotions on this paper like a hurricane storms over the sea, Your face is a beam of yellow sunlight through the deep dark clouds, But that beautiful light fades away as those clouds roll back in.

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November 29, 2005 17:21so_close_but_yetso_far

try having less sylables on a line. EG
My love for you is an overcast of thick clouds
on a rainy day,
Pouring my emotions on this paper,
like a hurricane storms over the sea,
Your face is a beam of yellow sunlight,
through the deep dark clouds,
But that beautiful light fades away,
as those clouds roll back in.

Good poem, you are talented.