Revealed Within a Shadow, by memiors of a slave
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Desperate attempt to be the cherished pet
The yearning to make proud stifles the fear of
disappointment
Loving discipline creates emotional bonds
Drawing-forth new reasons to trust
Lust rages under fevered flesh
Wanton desire follows greedy need
Darkness washes over shadowed thoughts
Caged in blissful torment even with in sleep
Chained by will leaves a silent goodbye to control
Cause of rapture when giving of soul
Mixing tear of joy with tears of pain
A touching of life that will never be the same
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Posted: 2005-11-15 05:15:41 UTC |
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2006-01-07 21:10:20 | JessicaxCore |
My favorite line is...
"The yearning to make proud stifles the fear of disappointment"
It's very well written and has a lot of meaning.
This whole poem is full of meaning.
You get a 7 from me.
Very well done. |
2008-03-14 20:20:15 | Tim Pozzi |
this is a gorgeously moving piece. |