Sarah, by lttlewhitedove Subscribe to rss feed for lttlewhitedove

Crisp, clean, fresh fallen snow shimmering like diamonds
the full moon cascading tracing your face in my mind, etched
there forever.  Beauty on beauty.  

You're breathless, cheecks blushed from love or the winter?
I want to hold you in my arms forever, never letting you
go,

Through the tears only a mother can understand I take in the
wonders of you, your uniqeness, the cold frosty night as you
bid me good-bye.  You, on your way to new adventures,
in a hurry.

All I can do is say I love you, watch as you leave and note
in my mind that you are like a new fallen snow full of
promise in the spring.
Posted: 2006-08-11 15:07:21 UTC

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2005-02-24 04:31:36Kauri
I loved how your poem is very visual and how it portrays the feelings of a mother at her saddest and yet proudest.

2005-03-30 14:37:10turquoise petals
thats a lovely meaningful poem

2005-03-30 14:37:21turquoise petals
thats a lovely meaningful poem

2005-05-15 00:46:25 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~
very nice! visual. I can feel the snow!:)

2005-08-14 17:54:43Sara
Thats amazing i like it.

2005-08-15 18:03:45ImaginaryAngel
i love this poem! its so beauitful! i also love the title because my name is sarah! good poem!

2005-08-25 15:41:47a rose by any otha name
the colors that you paint with your language completes a great portrait

2005-08-30 18:44:56Jesse
Very beautifully written.

2006-02-06 10:52:04Natalie
A very beautiful and insightful poem.

2006-04-03 10:54:00♥Just Sam♥
there's no second "c" in "cheek"

2006-04-25 23:04:10
Oh it's simply lovely!

2006-06-29 05:52:11User
Beautiful indeed..lovely too..

2007-01-10 17:20:04set_apart
Wow! I love the imagery. Very descriptive. You have obvious talent.

2007-06-12 10:30:21liberty moon
i've never seen snow so this was a blessing. lovely... thank u for the comment u left

2007-07-29 07:44:37wife2be
very touching i love it

2009-05-09 03:28:33marsha
she can have a second c in cheek if thats how she wants to write it _:)