Sarah

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By lttlewhitedove

Crisp, clean, fresh fallen snow shimmering like diamonds the full moon cascading tracing your face in my mind, etched there forever. Beauty on beauty. You're breathless, cheecks blushed from love or the winter? I want to hold you in my arms forever, never letting you go, Through the tears only a mother can understand I take in the wonders of you, your uniqeness, the cold frosty night as you bid me good-bye. You, on your way to new adventures, in a hurry. All I can do is say I love you, watch as you leave and note in my mind that you are like a new fallen snow full of promise in the spring.

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February 24, 2005 04:31Kauri

I loved how your poem is very visual and how it portrays the feelings of a mother at her saddest and yet proudest.

March 30, 2005 14:37turquoise petals

thats a lovely meaningful poem

March 30, 2005 14:37turquoise petals

thats a lovely meaningful poem

May 15, 2005 00:46 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

very nice! visual. I can feel the snow!:)

August 14, 2005 17:54Sara

Thats amazing i like it.

August 15, 2005 18:03ImaginaryAngel

i love this poem! its so beauitful! i also love the title because my name is sarah! good poem!

August 25, 2005 15:41a rose by any otha name

the colors that you paint with your language completes a great portrait

August 30, 2005 18:44Jesse

Very beautifully written.

February 6, 2006 10:52Natalie

A very beautiful and insightful poem.

April 3, 2006 10:54♥Just Sam♥

there's no second "c" in "cheek"

April 25, 2006 23:04Unknown

Oh it's simply lovely!

June 29, 2006 05:52User

Beautiful indeed..lovely too..

January 10, 2007 17:20set_apart

Wow! I love the imagery. Very descriptive. You have obvious talent.

June 12, 2007 10:30liberty moon

i've never seen snow so this was a blessing. lovely... thank u for the comment u left

July 29, 2007 07:44wife2be

very touching i love it

May 9, 2009 03:28marsha

she can have a second c in cheek if thats how she wants to write it _:)