"My Thoughts", by Crimson_Tide915
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Sitting in a corner
Concentrating on my life
Thinking of the things
As time passes me by
Not knowing what to do
And not knowing what to say
I leave myself thinking
Have I gone to deep
Than I say to myself
Is it any to late
To sort out my memories
before they start to decay
Now I am sitting here
Sorting my thoughts
Trying to keep
All the good things life brought
Sitting in my corner
Concentrating no more
Leaving my thoughts open
for the world to know |
| Posted: 2005-11-29 15:24:14 UTC |
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| 2005-11-17 22:59:36 | love nothing >>-- |
| Because it keeps talking about sitting in a corner...and im weird like that like with my friends in volleyball i say 'you watch that ball fly by jasmine!' or something...just me...lol ttyl |
| 2005-11-18 23:35:24 | waterlily |
| can anyone go 2 deep in truth?hmm? |
| 2005-11-23 02:45:10 | Kendall |
| I liked it but you need to fix the spelling of 'bye' to 'by'. You already know I think you have talent from the poets.com site my friend! |
| 2005-11-29 19:07:36 | Jennifer Wilson |
| Hello, this is Jennyleigh from the Poets'Workshop. My name here is Jennifer Wilson. Now, I found your poem to be very introspective, deep and interesting. I liked it. Keep up the good work. I have found the only way to improve is to keep writing. |
| 2005-12-12 22:11:33 | malarni |
| i know what you mean, when you no longer know what to say about your life, trying to sort through everything, sometimes it is just to much! I liked it, keep up the good work. :) |