"My Thoughts"

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By Crimson_Tide915 •

Sitting in a corner Concentrating on my life Thinking of the things As time passes me by Not knowing what to do And not knowing what to say I leave myself thinking Have I gone to deep Than I say to myself Is it any to late To sort out my memories before they start to decay Now I am sitting here Sorting my thoughts Trying to keep All the good things life brought Sitting in my corner Concentrating no more Leaving my thoughts open for the world to know

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November 17, 2005 02:42love nothing >>--

You sit in that corner babe!! haha kewl poem...

November 17, 2005 22:59love nothing >>--

Because it keeps talking about sitting in a corner...and im weird like that like with my friends in volleyball i say 'you watch that ball fly by jasmine!' or something...just me...lol ttyl

November 18, 2005 23:35waterlily

can anyone go 2 deep in truth?hmm?

November 23, 2005 02:45Kendall

I liked it but you need to fix the spelling of 'bye' to 'by'. You already know I think you have talent from the poets.com site my friend!

November 29, 2005 19:07Jennifer Wilson

Hello, this is Jennyleigh from the Poets'Workshop. My name here is Jennifer Wilson. Now, I found your poem to be very introspective, deep and interesting. I liked it. Keep up the good work. I have found the only way to improve is to keep writing.

December 12, 2005 22:11malarni

i know what you mean, when you no longer know what to say about your life, trying to sort through everything, sometimes it is just to much! I liked it, keep up the good work. :)