Paralised

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By <font color=crimson>Faith

<font size=2>The artistry of the moment is tangled in the fading tatters of her breath. She inhales the emptiness, trying to fill up her delicate confusion with something real, but a storm is brewing and her hands are slashed open She was abandoned, left to lick her wounds, left to heal the place where her heart used to beat. Now she stands alone as the rain falls, mingling with the blood of old scars, until all her pain has been washed away. And she can breathe deep the free air again. No second thoughts. No backwards glances. ©2005

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November 21, 2005 17:05Faith

--In order to fully understand this poem you have to read "Paralysis". This poem is in the aftermath of it, sort of parallel to it, but they can both stand on their own as seperate poems and seperate thoughts.--

November 28, 2005 05:50bedazzled

Very powerful and expressive. Great descriptions and strong language, I announce myself inspired!

November 29, 2005 22:52 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Thank you for your coments on my poems . You have a very touching and special way of reaching the center with your poetry. very good work!

January 15, 2006 19:12love nothing >>--

Thank you for your comment && I love thys poem..its creative && inspiring..x33

February 22, 2006 19:33lost the lonely dead

its good, sad and all but i like the line about licking her wounds and the place her heart used to be

September 28, 2006 02:45FrostedCold

paints a vivid picture

November 14, 2007 17:30~*~VanessaBrownrigg~*~

wow this poem is touching

December 2, 2008 03:19 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

all positive and foreward! what a great poem!I just wanted to say hello and thank you for commenting on one of my poems back in October 2008. Thank you Faith! I still love your name:) love ya Glo