life in a candle

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By ~*Amo*~ •

life is like a candle, as the candle shortens, so does life, as the candle melts, our tears wash us away, as the candle turns into a solid blob of nothingness, so do we, as the candle dies away...

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November 24, 2005 20:36~*Amo*~

ooo its not good, not good at all, its shit

November 30, 2005 16:24Faith

It's not that bad... it just needs a little work. *smiles*

September 5, 2006 08:09hyper

i like it, it's truely expressive ,there is a similarity btw the way we and the candle pass by this life