"Cynical Thoughts", by Crimson_Tide915 Subscribe to rss feed for Crimson_Tide915

Stepping up to a lonly grave
Feeling my heart start to race
My mind is surfing through my thoughts
Trying to find the lost cause

Staring at this lonely grave
I wondered why it had to end this way
Placing the flowers at my feet
Getting down to my knees

Praying to my Father up above
Asking him what I have done
Going through the life of guilt 
I wonder of this life that's spilt 

I could have stopped it from going this way 
But can't now that it's way to late 
What kind of monster did I create
In this cynical world of terrible hate

Standing by the lonely grave 
Looking at it as if it were fake
But i know it's not so now I wait
Until the day I see my mother in that place 
Posted: 2005-12-02 15:21:20 UTC

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2005-11-30 20:28:17Jennifer Wilson
This is so sad and feeling. I could feel your pain. FYI-spell cynical like this, but otherwise, good job.

2005-12-07 22:06:13 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~
This is a good! yeah!sad but good!

2005-12-07 22:14:44 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~
Thanks for the feedback on my poem too!

2005-12-07 22:14:52 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~
Thanks for the feedback on my poem too!

2005-12-09 22:18:00malarni
great poem, never stop writng!:)

2005-12-11 04:44:05love nothing >>--
OMG YOU'RE NOT SUPPOSED TO CORRECT SPELLING ON THIS TYPE OF MOOD POEM!! Well Good Job I loved this, but its so sad.

2006-01-08 21:58:59egyptian_girl
I loveeee it!!!!! it's just gr8!!! puts u really into the mooddd!!

2007-03-29 01:05:52Sithlim
You are... profesionaL.. Dont have words to express my feeling.. will only say that dont..just dont stop writing ...ever