"Cynical Thoughts", by Crimson_Tide915
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Stepping up to a lonly grave
Feeling my heart start to race
My mind is surfing through my thoughts
Trying to find the lost cause
Staring at this lonely grave
I wondered why it had to end this way
Placing the flowers at my feet
Getting down to my knees
Praying to my Father up above
Asking him what I have done
Going through the life of guilt
I wonder of this life that's spilt
I could have stopped it from going this way
But can't now that it's way to late
What kind of monster did I create
In this cynical world of terrible hate
Standing by the lonely grave
Looking at it as if it were fake
But i know it's not so now I wait
Until the day I see my mother in that place |
Posted: 2005-12-02 15:21:20 UTC |
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2005-11-30 20:28:17 | Jennifer Wilson |
This is so sad and feeling. I could feel your pain. FYI-spell cynical like this, but otherwise, good job. |
2005-12-09 22:18:00 | malarni |
great poem, never stop writng!:) |
2005-12-11 04:44:05 | love nothing >>-- |
OMG YOU'RE NOT SUPPOSED TO CORRECT SPELLING ON THIS TYPE OF MOOD POEM!!
Well Good Job I loved this, but its so sad. |
2006-01-08 21:58:59 | egyptian_girl |
I loveeee it!!!!!
it's just gr8!!! puts u really into the mooddd!! |
2007-03-29 01:05:52 | Sithlim |
You are... profesionaL..
Dont have words to express my feeling.. will only say that dont..just dont stop writing ...ever |