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November 30, 2005 04:23Loneliness is condescending

yeah i say leave it at whatever its the best thing ever

November 30, 2005 05:29lost the lonely dead

*laughs* thank you

December 20, 2005 11:55abs

hummmm poetic

December 22, 2005 05:13lost the lonely dead

yeah i really like the rhyming scheme its very intricate and well poetic

March 10, 2006 23:10Crimson.Wings

This is really......... original. Yeah. :)

March 11, 2006 05:32lost the lonely dead

yeah i was going to write more but i just gave up cause at that time i couldnt write anything happy

June 30, 2006 00:36A Lonely Song

Beautifully written. I love the structure and rhythm. I can really relate to it. It's very deep. I applaud your excellence. ;) (That's supposed to be a winking smiley, but it looks more evil. Oh well.) -Courtney

July 5, 2006 07:19lost the lonely dead

thanks, it took much tedious labor to produce this my lovely masterpiece but alas it is here

June 22, 2008 21:50Mary Magdalene

your little clique is fucking gay, and so are all your faggoty "poems"

December 17, 2008 23:55!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

NICE