Concrete Porcelan

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By <font color="FF">Danielle Lewis</font>

I am porcelan, a china doll so fragile, beauty frozen inside of this pale flesh, glossy brown eyes, rosy red cheeks, long brown hair, no one knows the truth.... My greatest weakness, never happy with myself, always trying to get the best, be better than what I am, When the best is right in front of me, my reflection in the mirror..... I am concrete, a foundation for a home, Stone cold exterior, protecting barrier within, Complex with many contributing ingredients, a mixture of talents, strengths, and weaknesses.... My greatest strength, individuality, staying true to myself, a fingerprint, a snowflake, no two the same, no photocopies, everything is different..... © Copyright of Danielle Lewis

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April 1, 2006 05:31Unknown

I really liked it and I can really relate. I can almost say that this poem is the exact defenition of my life! Well Done!

May 14, 2006 18:05XRebzX

I really really like this poem, it's excellent! I like the way you've worded it and everything, great job!:)