<font color=blue>The Ethereal Art of Drowning

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By <font color=crimson>Faith

<font size=2> The stars were shimm'ring in the gath'ring dark of the vaulted sky. The moon stared on through the twilight, a lidless, unblinking eye. The air was thick with cold as I passed beneath the eventide. I sank deep below the surface, seamlesly let go, and died. I gave in to the hunger of the void that swallowed me whole, The deeper I sank, the more it became my breath and my soul. I felt insatiable thirst for the darkness that held me tight. The torrent of fathomless bliss devour'd my thoughts, stole my sight. Then as I closed my eyes, euphoria stabbing like a knife, You appeared, engulfed the shadows, and you brought me back to life. I knew not from whence you came, I only knew this much was true: There, on the shores of the morning, life was empty without you. ©2004

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November 30, 2005 06:38Faith

--A poem written in September of last year. It took me forever to perfect, but I really like the way this one turned out! There's a certian rythem I was aiming for. What do you think of it though?--

December 26, 2005 20:42AndTheTreeWasHappy

Wow.

January 5, 2006 05:23lost the lonely dead

reminds me of something i kinda like it *thumb up*

March 16, 2006 05:19Loneliness is condescending

This is a wonderful poem your rhyme schema Idea works perfectly with your words and everything flows together

March 24, 2006 11:42My_pain_your_thrill

I love it!! Love it love it.... don't even know what to say.... wow!! xxx Thanks for all your comments, really appreciate them xxx

April 26, 2006 18:57lost the lonely dead

at the moment i like it even more then i did the last time i [email protected] heard of lucerin blue?