Im sure everything is just fine

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By lost the lonely dead

Dont ask me how i am Dont ask how the day went Im sure everything was fine dont tell me life is easy dont tell me life is hard Im sure its ok afterall dont tell me how you feel Dont open up your heart Im sure that theres nothing but joy Dont show me you need help Dont be there for us Im sure your friends are fine they always have been...right? Dont hide anymore Dont run to a shadow Im sure everythings ok inside Dont open up while you can Dont take the gift i give Im sure i'll live forever so dont worry there will be time Dont worry about that blood Dont care about the scars Im sure that means nothing as i slip from your eyes Dont cry for me cause i know you dont Dont miss me cause i hate what youve done Im sure its ok im sure its fine sort of written based off a person in my life i barely know and only met a few times as a young adult to capture him in this poem is hard im working on it

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December 9, 2005 03:36Loneliness is condescending

the beginning was a little vague but then the point began to be made near the end. the 'its ok' line ruined the schema. intruiging concept

December 9, 2005 07:26lost the lonely dead

i didnt realize id done that thx

December 21, 2005 18:19Faith

I know exactly how this feels...

May 9, 2006 07:53lost the lonely dead

yeah it was one of those moments