sad angry stare

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By lost the lonely dead •

suddenly you seem mute, ive seen it all before, i wish it would end today, praying for you desperately, time keeps moving, as i pace, what could i say or do? my heart tells me nothing my mind refuses to work i see you walk away, remembering a day when i cared less wishing id cared more sadly i watch you go, angrily i stare off, whats the purpose here? how can i keep up with this? even know my legs buckle my days seem to have no numbers my mind now filled with delerium my heart cries day and night these people around me fall away all who i knew go elsewhere i fall to my knees in fervent prayer renouncing sins screaming repentance filled still, with emptiness, my longing, guilting me, wasting, another day, antisocially, in a new way The poem should be read fairly quickly with pauses at commas and approriate places. Im thinking i might want to do something a little more structured maybe.

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December 28, 2005 22:39The Irish Child

This was fairly good. I enjoyed reading this.

December 31, 2005 04:34lost the lonely dead

mmm thanks

October 7, 2006 22:17Loneliness is condescending

i give this a half of thumb the words i think should be stronger if its ment to be a fast read poem

October 8, 2006 04:31lost the lonely dead

an interesting thought ill have to play with that thanks