If i cant have her, by Loneliness is condescending
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A plain Simple rose
Languished in Placid time
That is all I need
With a slow sunrise to break
From the peaceful eve
Eyes alight with Everlasting hope
You will be my love
Cry for me when I forget
Revolution of the Heart
Behind these pale blue eyes
A Deadly secret sleeps
Waiting to destroy your world
So I see to you
All that I need
A place Languished in Placid time
Within this plain Simple rose
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| Posted: 2005-12-02 01:51:17 UTC |
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| 2005-12-02 03:52:06 | Faith |
| Interesting use of language... |
| 2006-01-01 05:34:12 | lost the lonely dead |
| i like the way the beginning of it matches up with the end for one thing and its a thought-provoking poem to be sure and well i just like it |
| 2007-07-04 23:46:00 | -fruit-loop- |
| i dont get it,,.,. it's,..,.,,. rythmless |
| 2008-10-03 02:38:50 | Josiah Hammond :) |
| very nice i would love o get feed back on some of my stuff if u would. |