If i cant have her

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By Loneliness is condescending •

A plain Simple rose Languished in Placid time That is all I need With a slow sunrise to break From the peaceful eve Eyes alight with Everlasting hope You will be my love Cry for me when I forget Revolution of the Heart Behind these pale blue eyes A Deadly secret sleeps Waiting to destroy your world So I see to you All that I need A place Languished in Placid time Within this plain Simple rose

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December 2, 2005 03:52Faith

Interesting use of language...

December 3, 2005 03:41Lovesick and Sick of It

beautiful poem

January 1, 2006 05:34lost the lonely dead

i like the way the beginning of it matches up with the end for one thing and its a thought-provoking poem to be sure and well i just like it

July 4, 2007 23:46-fruit-loop-

i dont get it,,.,. it's,..,.,,. rythmless

October 3, 2008 02:38Josiah Hammond :)

very nice i would love o get feed back on some of my stuff if u would.