Save My Heart

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By bedazzled

The fire in your eyes fades to embers but steadily continues to glow, worries pounce on parolling thoughts, sieving through what I know. Shuffling through the files of my mind, searching for the unknown, have you just pushed your feelings aside? or like mine, have they grown? Can you see the embers reflected in my eyes? If you don't burn for me then smother mine, seeing the two of you together is torture but to you I will always appear fine. I won't give you the satisfaction of knowing, exactly what I feel, 'cause I'm not handing my heart over until I know this is real. Stop tugging at both arms and jerking me around, the unspoken words don't say it all, the mystery that enshrouds this mess creates greater heights from which to fall. I am done with falling for you just to drift apart, find a way to communicate with me before I lose my heart.

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December 3, 2005 22:01waterlily

eye laughed when eye saw the word POUNCE..that word seams 2 have Bounce! lol...no one likes 2 get hurt in love because it doesnt feel very good 2 get hurt Bi the one you care for most...that hurts the most actually!eye looked at the word..enshrouds...and thought of the "shroud of turin" immediatelee..some love so deeplee that it is impossible 2 match their level it seams 2 me...greater heights from which to fall? never looked at it from that vantage point before...what is it about LOVE that makes everyone so dan self-centered?hmmm?

December 4, 2005 02:40bedazzled

Waterlily your so abstract that I can never make any fucking sense out of your comments. So what's with that HMMMMMMM?!

March 22, 2006 21:10~*PuRely*DeVine*~

lol at waterlily i love the way you answered i loved this poem also

September 10, 2008 18:01ray!

WOW. It's very powerful. I like how much emotion there is in it.