Passionate Serenity ("better")

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By lost the lonely dead •

She seems to be lost in a world of someone else's choosing Her mind seems to be confused, uncertain of its task Her writtings sometimes as familiar as memories Swimming in the cold dark night air bathing in its comfort A sad happiness overwhelming me a peace somewhere deep Truth and lies make love in our world of pop culture Lost in who i am and who im not shes out off on the edge Looking down wishing she had no ties wishing to jump Confused blurry vision twists my precepts and convictions The all-consuming fire of discontented peace In truth restless apathetic acceptance of fate Decietful, loving, passionate serenity Good bye god bless let us fall to the realm of nothingness A mist not here but found in the cold dark of night Passionately in love with serenity

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December 23, 2005 19:04Loneliness is condescending

this ones good so far .... i like it so i'm going to give you a seven tell me when you change it if you do so i can rip it to peices

April 17, 2006 00:06lost the lonely dead

*smiles* please rip away cause ive modified it again and i kinda like it